So after finally getting to my draft 6 revisions, or making notes for draft 7, I've realized something.
I'm pretty awful when it comes to action scenes.
Going through my first official action scene, I've ended up with about a dozen notes on one page. It's pretty sad:
That would be half of the page.
I wonder if this'll be what Shadowed looks like, once I revise it. Well, if I win Nano, anyway. Hopefully I do. There's less than 2 weeks before Nano begins, and I'm getting kind of worried...